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The table uses four economic indicators to show that the standard of living in five selected countries in 1982.

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The table uses four economic indicators to show that the standard of living in five selected countries in 1982. Overall, it can be seen that the quality of life in the USA was far higher than the other four countries. To begin, the USA, which is a developed country, had the highest GNP at 13, 160 dollars per head. It also had a much higher daily calorie intake and life expectancy, and the lowest rate of infant mortality The other developing countries had quality of life ratings that were significantly lower. The range of indicators for Egypt, Indonesia and Bolivia were similar, with Egypt having the highest quality of life amongst the three. However, the infant mortality rate in Egypt's was slightly higher than Indonesia's at 97 death per 1000 compared to 87 in Indonesia Bangladesh had by far the lowest quality of life in all the indicators. Its GPN was one hundred times smaller than the USA's its calorie intake and life expectancy were about half those of the USA, and its infant mortality rate was 10 times greater.
The table
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four economic

indicators to
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show
that the standard

of living in five selected countries in

1982.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that the quality of
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life
in the USA was far higher than the other four countries.

To
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begin
, the USA, which is a developed

country, had the highest GNP at 13, 160

dollars per head. It
also
had a much

higher daily calorie intake and life

expectancy, and the lowest rate of

infant
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mortality


The other
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developing countries
had

quality of
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life
ratings that were

significantly
lower. The range of

indicators for Egypt, Indonesia and

Bolivia were similar, with Egypt having

the highest quality of
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life
amongst the

three.
However
, the infant mortality rate

in Egypt's was
slightly
higher than

Indonesia's at 97 death per 1000

compared to 87 in Indonesia

Bangladesh had by far the lowest

quality of
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life
in all the indicators. Its

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GPN
was one hundred times smaller

than the USA's its calorie intake and life

expectancy were about half those of the

USA, and its infant mortality rate was

10 times greater.
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IELTS academic The table uses four economic indicators to show that the standard of living in five selected countries in 1982.

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