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Waste Recycling rates in the U.S. from 1960 to 2011

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The line graph compares the recycling rates in the U. S. (1960 - 2011) to the total waste recovery during the same timeframe. On the whole the total waste recovery is on a higher ground compared to the percent recycling. Getting back to the details, there's been an exponential rise of 1551% in the waste recovery from the 1960's to the 2011's but the recovery rate seems to be growing at a slower pace, which is truly alarming. Though the recycling rate has been increasing well since the 1990's its still isn't sufficient to erase the footprints of human in the waste recovery. It truly seems like 2011 was an amazing year for recovery with over 34% of the waste being recovered, but that was just about 30 million tons. Over the years there is only the possibility of the total waste recovery increasing with the increase in population, and with the current pace of things in the recovery things look very grim for us and the planet Earth in the course of the future.
The line graph compares the recycling rates in the U. S. (
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1960 - 2011
) to the total
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waste
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recovery
during the same timeframe.
On the whole
the total
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waste
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recovery
is on a higher ground compared to the percent recycling.

Getting back to the
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details
, there's been an exponential rise of 1551% in the
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waste
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recovery
from the
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1960's
to the 2011's
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but
the
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recovery
rate seems to be growing at a slower pace, which is
truly
alarming. Though the recycling rate has been increasing well since the
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1990's
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its
still
isn't sufficient to erase the footprints of human in the
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waste
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recovery
. It
truly
seems like 2011 was an amazing year for
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recovery
with over 34% of the
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waste
being recovered
,
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that was
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just
about 30 million tons.

Over the years there is
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only
the possibility of the total
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waste
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recovery
increasing with the increase in population, and with the
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current
pace of things in the
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things look
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grim for us and the planet Earth in the course of the future.
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IELTS academic Waste Recycling rates in the U. S. from 1960 to 2011

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  American English
3 paragraphs
175 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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