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EXPORT EARNINGS 2015-2016

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The given bar chart provides an information about the ratio of an Export earnings over a period of a year. From the given bar chart, it can be clearly visible that petroleum products has, highest export earnings, whereas textiles has lowest export earnings. Lets us discuss in detail, Overall the fuel export was more and the profit was $61 and $62 billions respectively in 2015-2016 years. secondly engineering goods profit range was $58 and $61 in 2015-2016 years, whereas gems and jewellery has moderate earning in export during those periods and the earning range was $43 billions and $41 billions in 2016 which is slightly less compare to 2015, moreover agriculutural products has similar benefit range in those two years, at last textiles has very less earning in export business $28 billions in 2015 and in 2016 this profit range increased to $3billons and reached upto to $31billions. Inconclusion, petroleum products and engineering goods bar chart profits showing upward direction compare to other kinds of exports.
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, whereas textiles has
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earnings.

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Overall
the fuel
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was more and the
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was $61 and $62
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billions
respectively
in 2015-2016 years.
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secondly
engineering
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goods
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profit
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was $58 and $61 in 2015-2016 years, whereas gems and
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jewellery
has moderate
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in
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during those periods and the
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earning
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was $43
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and $41
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in 2016 which is
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agriculutural
products has similar benefit
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in those two years, at last textiles has
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less
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earning
in
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business $28
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billions
in 2015 and in 2016 this
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range
increased to $3billons and reached
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to $31billions.

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Inconclusion
, petroleum products and engineering
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bar chart
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showing upward direction compare to other kinds of
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IELTS academic EXPORT EARNINGS 2015-2016

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166 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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