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The following chart shows side efect experienced by peolple vaccinated against COVID - 19 in the United Kingdom

The following chart shows side efect experienced by peolple vaccinated against COVID - 19 in the United Kingdom 1AaeG
The given bar chart illustrates the figures for people who go through five aftereffects after being vaccinated against COVID - 19. It can clearly be seen that, most of the levels of each symptom are mild and moderate, severe is almost rare. Moreover, it is different between two categories of age, the age from 18 to 55 and the age over 55. The symptom that most individuals get is fatigue, and people in the age of over 55 are less than another group of age. In a mild level, both categories have a fairly equal number of residents, which accounted for 21. 1 while in a moderate one, the number of dwellers from 18 to 55 years old reached the 33. 7 mark, with the figure for the group over 55 years old not far behind (26. 6). The difference in a severe level is more significant (46 and 28). The side effect is felt by the least of people is joint pain. Just as fatigue, joint pain has the same inhabitants of two groups in mild rate, which reach approximately 10, whereas it is noticeable that in moderate rate, the figure for the age under 55 outnumbered that of the group over 55 (11. 2 and 8. 7, respectively). Other symptoms such as muscle pain and headache are in the same way, in a mild level, there is the similarity in two groups of age, yet in moderate one, the young people tend to experience more than the middle-aged. By contrast, the number of under 55 - year - old people who get chill dominates that of people who are over 55years old. The rate of severe is too small in almost mentioned symptoms.
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