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The bar chart illustrates the figures for phone ownerships in ten Europe countries between 2005 and 2010. Overall, there was a dramatic growth in the ownership of mobile phones during 5 years. It is evident that UK, Germany and Italy had the highest number of mobile phone owners in 2005, arranging from 4 million. In the next 5 years, the figures for Germany peaked 14 million users and become the world highest figure. The UK became the second highest ownerships figures at 12 million. The figure for Sweden, France, Finland, Norway, Denmark and Spain fluctuated between 1 million and 2 million people in 2005. Though, Sweden and Italy followed right behind the UK. Spain registered a tenfold increase as well as France grew sevenfold. In contrast, other countries have their figures doubled.

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