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The flowchart illustrates that production process of coloured plastic clips in red, blue and yellow.

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The flowchart illustrates that production process of coloured plastic clips in red, blue and yellow. Overall, there are four main stages in the production of plastic clips from the small factory. First two stages involved actual preparation of the clips while the other two consist of quality control before the clips sent out from the factory to the retailers and to be sold to the public. First and Foremost, the molten plastic divided into three moulds depending on requirement of colors such red, blue and yellow. After that, the clips appear from the moulds and a quality control machine checks them for strength. Poor clips are rejected. Furthermore, In the third stage, the clips are sorted by hand categorized into two groups first is mixed colors and second is single colors. Afterwards, the quality control machine checks the color mixtures second time and divided into single colors and mixed colors batches. In the final stage, clips are packed and dispatched to the markets.
The flowchart illustrates that production process of
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coloured
plastic
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clips
in red, blue and yellow.

Overall
, there are four main
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stages
in the production of plastic
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clips
from the
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small
factory.
First
two
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stages
involved actual preparation of the
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clips
while the other two
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consist
of quality control
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before
the
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clips
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sent
out from the factory to the retailers and to
be sold
to the public.

First
and Foremost, the molten plastic divided into three
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moulds
depending on requirement of colors such red, blue and yellow. After that, the
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clips
appear from the
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moulds
and a quality control machine
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checks
them for strength. Poor
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clips
are rejected
.

Furthermore
, In the third
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stage
, the
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clips
are sorted
by hand categorized into two groups
first
is mixed
colors and second is single colors. Afterwards, the quality control machine
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checks
the
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color
mixtures second time and divided into single colors and mixed colors batches. In the final
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stage
,
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clips
are packed
and dispatched to the markets.

IELTS academic The flowchart illustrates that production process of coloured plastic clips in red, blue and yellow.

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163 words
6.0
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