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Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below. You should write at least 150 words.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below. AjPQM
The graph indicates the figures for the smokers both men and women. Overall, when we take a look at the graph, we can see that, although the amount of the consumers were significantly different from each other, the numbers were almost the same in the end. Unsurprisingly, men smokers' ratios were much more than women's. Men's were exactly 600 per 1000 people, whereas it was almost 99 per a thousand consumers for the women smokers. However, the smoker of men has decreased over the years, on the other hand, women have increased. The figures for both genders were 290 and 250 respectively in 1995. At the end of the graph, we see that the proportions for men smokers were around 250 and precisely 200 for the women smokers in 2000.
The graph indicates the figures for the smokers both
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men
and women.

Overall
, when we take a look at the graph, we can
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see
that, although the amount of the consumers were
significantly
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different
from each other, the numbers were almost the same in the
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end
.

Unsurprisingly
,
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men
smokers' ratios were much more than women's.
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Men
's were exactly 600 per 1000
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people
, whereas it was almost 99 per a thousand consumers for the women smokers.
However
, the smoker of
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men
has decreased over the years,
on the other hand
, women have increased. The figures for both genders were 290 and 250
respectively
in 1995. At the
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end
of the graph, we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
that the proportions for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
men
smokers were around 250 and
precisely
200 for the women smokers in 2000.

IELTS academic Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
130 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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