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The first map delineates a civic center plan these days and the second map illustrates what alterations are expected to be made there in the future.

The first map delineates a civic center plan these days and the second map illustrates what alterations are expected to be made there in the future. Y6mB

The first map delineates a civic center plan these days and the second map illustrates what alterations are expected to be made there in the future. Overall it is clear that while ___cinema, ___town hall, and ___shopping center are predicted to remain the previous locations, other buildings will be repositioned. Turning to the territory alongside North Avenue, currently, there are two car parks to the right and left side of the cinema. However, it is foreseen the territory of the cinema will be unchanged, while the initial spaces for the parking will be replaced by the cafe on the left side and the hotel and restaurant on the right. Regarding the south part of the center between High street and Smith street, the council office, exhibition and library are predicted to exchange their present locations. In particular, the exhibition will occupy the territory of the library in front of the shopping center, the library will emerge on the council offices position, but underground next to the town hall and the council offices will move to the south-west. Also, the town hall territory will share its space with underground car parks.

The first
 map delineates a civic center plan these days and the second map illustrates what alterations are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 to be made
 there in the future.

Overall
 it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that while ___cinema, ___town hall, and ___shopping center are predicted
 to remain the previous locations, other buildings will be repositioned
.

Turning to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprovincesectorlandneighborhooddistrictzone
territory
 alongside North Avenue, currently
, there are two car parks to the right and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side of the cinema. However
, it is foreseen the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprovincesectorlandneighborhooddistrictzone
territory
 of the cinema will be unchanged
, while the initial spaces for the parking will be replaced
 by the 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side and the hotel and restaurant on the right.

Regarding the south part of the center between High street and Smith street, the council office, exhibition and library are predicted
 to exchange their present locations. In particular
, the exhibition will occupy the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprovincesectorlandneighborhooddistrictzone
territory
 of the library in front of the shopping center, the library will emerge on the council offices position, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 underground next
 to the town hall and the council offices will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 to the south-west. Also
, the town hall You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprovincesectorlandneighborhooddistrictzone
territory
 will share its space with underground car parks. 