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The first map delineates a civic center plan these days and the second map illustrates what alterations are expected to be made there in the future.

The first map delineates a civic center plan these days and the second map illustrates what alterations are expected to be made there in the future. Y6mB
The first map delineates a civic center plan these days and the second map illustrates what alterations are expected to be made there in the future. Overall it is clear that while ___cinema, ___town hall, and ___shopping center are predicted to remain the previous locations, other buildings will be repositioned. Turning to the territory alongside North Avenue, currently, there are two car parks to the right and left side of the cinema. However, it is foreseen the territory of the cinema will be unchanged, while the initial spaces for the parking will be replaced by the cafe on the left side and the hotel and restaurant on the right. Regarding the south part of the center between High street and Smith street, the council office, exhibition and library are predicted to exchange their present locations. In particular, the exhibition will occupy the territory of the library in front of the shopping center, the library will emerge on the council offices position, but underground next to the town hall and the council offices will move to the south-west. Also, the town hall territory will share its space with underground car parks.
The
first
map delineates a civic center plan these days and the second map illustrates what alterations are
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expected
to
be made
there in the future.

Overall
it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
that while ___cinema, ___town hall, and ___shopping center
are predicted
to remain the previous locations, other buildings will
be repositioned
.

Turning to the
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territory
alongside North Avenue,
currently
, there are two car parks to the right and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
side of the cinema.
However
, it is foreseen the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
territory
of the cinema will
be unchanged
, while the initial spaces for the parking will
be replaced
by the
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
on the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
side and the hotel and restaurant on the right.

Regarding the south part of the center between High street and Smith street, the council office, exhibition and library
are predicted
to exchange their present locations.
In particular
, the exhibition will occupy the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
territory
of the library in front of the shopping center, the library will emerge on the council offices position,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
underground
next
to the town hall and the council offices will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
to the south-west.
Also
, the town hall
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
territory
will share its space with underground car parks.
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IELTS academic The first map delineates a civic center plan these days and the second map illustrates what alterations are expected to be made there in the future.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
190 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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