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The line graph illustrates the number of people in millions who travelled daily by three divergent mode of transport in the United Kingdom between the time period of 1970 to 2030.

The line graph illustrates the number of people in millions who travelled daily by three divergent mode of transport in the United Kingdom between the time period of 1970 to 2030. NYLW
The line graph illustrates the number of people in millions who travelled daily by three divergent mode of transport in the United Kingdom between the time period of 1970 to 2030. Overall, the car remain most popular method of travelling by people in the UK, while train is becoming increasingly used, have not become more popular yet. As is observed from the graph, in 1970, approximately 5 million commuters prefered a car, whereas the train and the bus used by below 3 million and about 4 million people respectively. Over this span of 30 years, the number of worker chose the car increased rapidly and reached at almost 7 millions. Pessangers used the train also slightly rose to exactly 3 millions. However, the number of people catching a bus was slowly went down near to 0. 5 million. Moving to the further details, in 2030, 9 million commuters will be expected to travelled by car. Roughly 6 million passengers are predicted to use the train. In contrast, there is a continuous decline in the figure of travellers who chose the bus below 3 million.
The line graph illustrates the number of
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people
in
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millions
who travelled daily by three divergent
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mode
of transport in the United Kingdom between the time period of 1970 to 2030.

Overall
, the
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car
remain most popular method of travelling by
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people
in the UK, while
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train
is becoming
increasingly
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used
, have not become more popular
yet
.

As
is observed
from the graph, in 1970, approximately 5
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million
commuters
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prefered
a
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car
, whereas the
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train
and the bus
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used
by below 3
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million
and about 4
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million
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people
respectively
. Over this span of 30 years, the number of worker chose the
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car
increased
rapidly
and reached at almost 7
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millions
.
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Pessangers
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used
the
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train
also
slightly
rose to exactly 3
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millions
.
However
, the number of
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people
catching a bus was
slowly
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went
down near to 0. 5 million.

Moving to the
further
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details
, in 2030, 9
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million
commuters will be
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expected
to
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travelled
by
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car
. Roughly 6
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million
passengers
are predicted
to
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use
the
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train
.
In contrast
, there is a continuous decline in the figure of
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travellers
who chose the bus below 3
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million
.
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IELTS academic The line graph illustrates the number of people in millions who travelled daily by three divergent mode of transport in the United Kingdom between the time period of 1970 to 2030.

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