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The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan.

The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. B0Qa
The chart gives information about Japan's population over the years, moreover, it also gives future trends with respect to past and present data. Secondly, table also gives idea about percentage of population above 65 years over the years along with future predictions. First chart illustrates population trends between 1950 and 2055 (prediction). Predominantly, population was 84. 1 million in 1950. Population witnessed a steady positive growth of about 4 - 6 million increase in population each year till 1985. After 1985, increase in number of population was limited to 1 - 3 million till 2005. As it is visible from chart from 2010 population experienced decrease in population and future trends also describe the same story. Predictions suggest, Japan's population will be around 110 and 89. 9 in 2035 and 2055, respectively. One of the reasons for this downward trajectory can be seen in the table below the chart. The table gives an overview of population density which are over 65 years. In the light of the facts shown in the table, it is clear that population density of aged citizen has increased over the years also trends suggests this percentage would climb even more in upcoming years. Population in 1950 had 4. 9% that is 4. 1 million of population above 65, this reading increased to 20% that translates to 25. 7 million population aged above or equal to 65. Following predictions suggests population density of aged citizens will show rise of about 34% and 41% in 2035 and 2055, respectively. Thus, above chart has shown downward trend in predictions as total population would have increase in aged citizens which would translate in more mortality rate.
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information about Japan's
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population
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the years,
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also
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future
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trends
with respect to past and present data.
Secondly
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table
also
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gives
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idea
about percentage of
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population
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above
65 years
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over
the years along with future predictions.

First
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chart
illustrates
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population
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trends
between 1950 and 2055
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(prediction)
.
Predominantly
,
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population
was 84. 1
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million
in 1950.
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Population
witnessed a steady
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positive
growth of about
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4 - 6
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million
increase in
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population
each
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year
till 1985. After 1985, increase in number of
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population
was limited
to
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1 - 3
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million
till 2005. As it is visible from
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chart
from 2010
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population
experienced decrease in
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population
and future
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trends
also
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describe
the same story.
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Predictions
suggest, Japan's
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population
will be around 110 and 89. 9 in 2035 and 2055,
respectively
. One of the reasons for this downward trajectory can be
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seen
in the
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table
below the chart.

The
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gives
an overview of
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population
density which are
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over
65 years. In the light of the facts shown in the
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table
, it is
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clear
that
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population
density of
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aged
citizen has increased
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over
the years
also
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trends
suggests this percentage would climb even more in upcoming years.
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Population
in 1950 had 4. 9%
that is
4. 1
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of
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65, this reading increased to 20% that translates to 25. 7
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million
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aged
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or equal to 65. Following
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predictions
suggests
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density of
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citizens will
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rise of about 34% and 41% in 2035 and 2055,
respectively
.

Thus
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has shown downward
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in
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predictions
as total
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would have increase in
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aged
citizens which would translate in more mortality rate.
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