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The chart below shows the proportions of graduates from Brighton University in 2019 entering different employment sectors. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the proportions of graduates from Brighton University in 2019 entering different employment sectors. rMDN
The pie chart provides information on the ratio of graduate students at Brighton University who chose a variety of employment fields after graduating in the year 2019. Overall, it is clear that less than half of the graduates chose the service and manufacturing industries for their employment over other sectors. In industries like fabrication and service, there was a huge demand among the pass-out students which was 16. 3% and 33% respectively. out of the 100%, 12. 1% wanted to join the politics and governmental job and 14. 7% students were liked to enter in the educational field. there was the almost same percentage in Science & technology and transportation, 7. 3%, and 7. 8% respectively. in construction services, 5. 6% percentage of fresher was wanted to join while 2. 8% chose their growth of the career in other fields. finally, there was a negligible amount of the graduate who selects the charity(0. 3%) and sports(0. 1%) sectors, in the year 2019.
The pie chart provides information on the ratio of graduate students at Brighton University who chose a variety of employment fields after graduating in the year 2019.

Overall
, it is
clear
that less than half of the graduates chose the service and manufacturing industries for their employment over other sectors.

In industries like fabrication and service, there was a huge demand among the pass-out students which was 16. 3% and 33%
respectively
.
out
of the 100%, 12. 1% wanted to
join
the politics and governmental job and 14. 7% students
were liked
to
enter in the educational
field.
there
was the almost same percentage in Science & technology and transportation, 7. 3%, and 7. 8%
respectively
.

in
construction services, 5. 6% percentage of fresher
was wanted
to
join
while 2. 8% chose their growth of the career in other fields.
finally
, there was a negligible amount of the graduate who selects the charity(0. 3%) and sports(0. 1%) sectors, in the year 2019.
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