The first chart below shows how many energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. v.2
The first chart below shows how many energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. v. 2
The pie charts provide information about the percentage of the energy use in an Australian household and this usage leads to how much green house gas emissions.
Overall, the majority of energy used for heating, while the highest rate of green house gas emissions occur in water heating. Another worth noticing point is that the percentages of gas emissions are higher than energy used in an household, expect heating.
Looking at the details, it can be seen that heating and water heating take a great deal of energy, at 42 and 32 per cents in turn. The figures of used energy are less than 15 per cent for others. Cooling is the sector with the lowest share of energy usage.
By contrast, the percentage of water heating at producing gas emissions is the highest at 32. The percentages of the green house emissions are twice as high as the percentages of energy spend on refrigeration and lighting. The used energy on heating and refrigeration is almost the same. Cooling is the lowest proccess in term of gas emissions.
The pie charts provide information about the
percentage
of the
energy
use
in an Australian household and this usage leads to how much green
house
gas
emissions.
Overall
, the majority of
energy
used
for
heating
, while the highest rate of green
house
gas
emissions
occur in water
heating
. Another worth noticing point is that the
percentages
of
gas
emissions
are higher than
energy
used
in
an
household,
expect
heating.
Looking at the
details
, it can be
seen
that
heating
and water
heating
take a great deal of
energy
, at 42 and 32 per cents in turn. The figures of
used
energy
are less than 15 per cent for others. Cooling is the sector with the lowest share of
energy
usage.
By contrast, the
percentage
of water
heating
at producing
gas
emissions
is the highest at 32. The
percentages
of the green
house
emissions
are twice as high as the
percentages
of
energy
spend on refrigeration and lighting. The
used
energy
on
heating
and refrigeration is almost the same. Cooling is the lowest
proccess
in term of
gas
emissions
.
1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
29Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes