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The first chart Below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The first chart Below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. qAWG
The first diagram displays everyday average power consumed by the Australian and the second graph illustrates the greenhouse gas discharge which outcome from this power use. Overall, it is clear from the graphs that most of the energy use in the heating and the water heating and most of the gas produced by the water heating and other appliances. Australian people most of their power used in the heating which is 42% and the result is 15% greenhouse gas discharge as a result. Second most use is in the water heating which is 30% and as a result 32% greenhouse gas is emissions which is the biggest proportion. And the third position is other appliances where Australian use 15% of their power, as a result 28% gas emissions. In contrast, in cooling use 2% power and almost same proportion of gas discharged which is 3%. However, 7% of power use in refrigeration and 4% power use in lighting from where almost double greenhouse gas emissions which are 14% and 8% respectively.
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consumed by the Australian and the second graph illustrates the
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greenhouse
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discharge which outcome from this
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power
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from the graphs that most of the energy
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in the
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and the water
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and most of the
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produced by the water
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and other appliances.

Australian
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most of their
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in the
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which is 42% and the
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is 15%
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discharge as a
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. Second most
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is in the water
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which is 30% and as a
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32%
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is emissions which is the biggest proportion. And the third position is other appliances where Australian
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15% of their
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, as a
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28%
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emissions.

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, in cooling
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2%
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and almost same proportion of
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discharged which is 3%.
However
, 7% of
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in refrigeration and 4%
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in lighting from where almost double
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greenhouse
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emissions which are 14% and 8%
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The first chart Below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

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