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The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children’s sports between 2008 and 2014. The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same time period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children’s sports between 2008 and 2014. The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same time period. k7je
The two line graph illustrates information about, amount of money spent by parents in britain on children's sports monthly and participation of children in different kinds of sports(Football, athletics, swimming). Overall the expenditure on sports increased gradually over the four year period from 2008 to 2014. The children were largely interested in football from the begining followed by athletics and swimming, though the children were less interseted early. On an average the amount of money spent on sports surged consistently from 2008 to 2014. Intially 20 pounds were spent in 2008. 25 pounds in 2010. 28 pounds in 2012. 32 pounds in 2014 by british parents. Football was the major sport played by children in britain in the same period from 2008 to 2014, which recorded around 8 million children playing. Athletics was played by only 1 million children in 2008 in the subsequent years many children showed enthusiasam, almost 4. 8 million played by the end of 2014. Swimming was the least interesting sport for children in the given period, it was played by around 2 million in 2008 increased to just 4 million in 2014.
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increased
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interested in football from the
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followed by athletics and swimming, though the
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were less
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interseted
early.

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surged
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from 2008 to 2014.
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Intially
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28 pounds
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32 pounds
in 2014 by
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parents.

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in the same period from 2008 to 2014, which recorded around 8
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playing. Athletics was
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in 2008 increased to
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IELTS academic The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children’s sports between 2008 and 2014. The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same time period.

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