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The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comprison where relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. KR5L
The pie charts provide data on the ages of populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and 2050 estimates. The largest proportion of a preponderance of people in Yemen was between 0 to 14 years old, within 50. 1% in 2000. In Italy, furthermore, the highest population was between 15 and 59 that being 61. 6% in the same period. Alternatively, the minority of people in Yemen belonging to 60 or more ages and in Italy was 24. 1% for the same ages. The prediction for 2050, the charts demonstrate population of Yemen in this range age, 15-59 years old and 60 or more years will have increased by 57. 3% and 5. 7% respectively. On the contrary, in Italy, the number of people with 60 or more years will rise to 42. 3%, and also the population with 15 and 59 years old will drop to 46. 2%. To sum up, the two figures show the rates the population with 60 or more years old are going up in both countries by the year 50.
The pie charts provide data on the ages of
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populations
of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and 2050 estimates.

The largest proportion of a preponderance of
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people
in Yemen was
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between 0 to 14
years
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old
, within 50. 1% in 2000. In Italy,
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, the highest
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population
was between 15 and 59 that being 61. 6% in the same period.
Alternatively
, the minority of
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people
in Yemen belonging to 60 or more ages and in Italy was 24. 1% for the same ages.

The prediction for 2050, the charts demonstrate
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population
of Yemen in this range age, 15-59 years
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old
and 60 or more years will have increased by 57. 3% and 5. 7%
respectively
.
On the contrary
, in Italy, the number of
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people
with 60 or more years will rise to 42. 3%, and
also
the
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population
with 15 and 59 years
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old
will drop to 46. 2%.

To sum up, the two figures
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the rates the
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population
with 60 or more years
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old
are going up in both countries by the
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year
50.
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