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The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. 08yl
The diagram's given represents architecture of wave-energy machine and it's location options. Machine has a electricity generator, turbines, and chambers. Overall, Engines are acceptable with two location options as we install them in small waves the cost of installation is inexpensive although low output is progressed where as if we fit them deep into the sea or larger waves so that can expect high output and cost of installation is uneconomical. The water enters from the bottom of the machine as the energy engine is placed with sea-level. Air flow's from these water levels to turbine where the turbine are reliable on generator. Two chambers are fitted on at the sea level that are based on wave direction and other a the top. There are two turbines placed one for intake of air from atmosphere and other from water levels. Turbine plays a excellent role in the machine. Air flow entered into turbine produces energy.
The diagram's
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given
represents architecture of wave-energy
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machine
and it's location options.
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Machine
has
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a
electricity generator,
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turbines
, and chambers.

Overall
, Engines are acceptable with two location options as we install them in
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small
waves the cost of installation is inexpensive although low output
is progressed
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where as
if we fit them deep into the sea or larger waves
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so
that can
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expect
high output and cost of installation is uneconomical.

The water enters from the bottom of the
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machine
as the energy engine
is placed
with sea-level. Air flow's from these water levels to
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turbine
where the
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turbine
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are
reliable on generator.

Two chambers
are fitted
on at the sea level that
are based
on wave direction and other
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a the
top. There are two
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turbines
placed one for intake of air from atmosphere and other from water levels.
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Turbine
plays
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a
excellent role in the
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machine
. Air flow entered into
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turbine
produces energy.

IELTS academic The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
155 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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