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The final stage is the fabrics are sewn into clothes, clothes from recycled plastic bottles, and they are sold in clothing stores and supermarkets

The final stage is the fabrics are sewn into clothes, clothes from recycled plastic bottles, and they are sold in clothing stores and supermarkets aVNMX
The pictures illustrate the velopment of the art gallery that have taken place between 2015 and present. In general, it is clearly shown that exhibition room #1, #2 and #3 remained unchanged throughout the given period of time and there are some things that have been repositioned or removed and some things have been added up to the present time. There were major changes in the art gallery over the years. First of all, The reception desk located in the main road of the art gallery was moved to a position closer to the entrance. The next noticeable feature is that the right-hand side of the ground floor has now been fitted with an lift. Furthermore, the café on the top left corner of the ground floor has been demolished and converted into a gallery shop, vending machine was also located next to it. The exhibition room #4 on the left-hand side of the room was also divided into 2 small areas, a temporary one and an area for children. Especially, the three exhibition rooms are reunched unchanged in more than 5 years.
The pictures illustrate the
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velopment
of the art
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gallery
that have taken place between 2015 and present.

In general
, it is
clearly
shown that exhibition
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room
#1, #2 and #3 remained unchanged throughout the
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given
period of time and there are
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some
things that have
been repositioned
or removed and
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some
things have been
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added
up to the present time.

There were major
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changes
in the art
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gallery
over the years.
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First of all
, The reception desk located in the main road of the art
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gallery
was
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moved
to a position closer to the entrance. The
next
noticeable feature is that the right-hand side of the
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ground floor
has
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now
been fitted
with
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an
lift.
Furthermore
, the café on the top
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left
corner of the
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ground floor
has
been demolished
and converted into a
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gallery
shop, vending machine was
also
located
next
to it. The exhibition
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room
#4 on the
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left
-hand side of the
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room
was
also
divided into 2
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small
areas, a temporary one and an area for children.
Especially
, the three exhibition
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rooms
are
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reunched
unchanged in more than 5 years.
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IELTS academic The final stage is the fabrics are sewn into clothes, clothes from recycled plastic bottles, and they are sold in clothing stores and supermarkets

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