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The given pie charts depict the amount of water used in two nations in America with the rest of the globe for three purposes namely industry, agriculture, residential. Looking at the graphs, it is immediately obvious that domestic purpose registered the highest water consumption figure in San Diego County and California. Conversely, the significant noticeable percentage was recorded in formal study regarding farming in the rest of the world. Domestic purpose accounted for a vast bulk of total water usage, at 60% in San Diego County. Meanwhile, agricultural activities only made up a meager proportion, at 17%. There was an opposite distribution which was seen in household and farming in the rest of the world accounted for 8% and 69% respectively of the aggregation of water consumption. This figure for industrial usage was fully similar for both these regions, at 23%. In California, the water consumption did not witness such dramatic discrepancies across the categories. Household and industry for using water constituted approximately similar proportion, at 39% and 33% respectively. This figure for agriculture only made up a negligible number, at 28% of aggregation of water consumption.
The
given
pie charts depict the amount of
water
used
in two nations in America with the rest of the globe for three purposes
namely
industry, agriculture, residential.

Looking at the graphs, it is immediately obvious that domestic purpose registered the highest
water
consumption
figure in San Diego County and California.
Conversely
, the significant noticeable percentage
was recorded
in formal study regarding farming in the rest of the world.

Domestic purpose accounted for a vast bulk of total
water
usage, at 60% in San Diego County. Meanwhile, agricultural activities
only
made up a meager proportion, at 17%. There was an opposite distribution which was
seen
in household and farming in the rest of the world accounted for 8% and 69%
respectively
of the aggregation of
water
consumption
. This figure for industrial usage was
fully
similar for both these regions, at 23%.

In California, the
water
consumption
did not witness such dramatic discrepancies across the categories. Household and industry for using
water
constituted approximately similar proportion, at 39% and 33%
respectively
. This figure for agriculture
only
made up a negligible number, at 28% of aggregation of
water
consumption
.
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IELTS academic academic writing pie chart

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
187 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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