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the export changes between 2015-2016

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The chart shown above presents us with the value of some country’s export in many categories during the years 2015 and 2016. On the chart we can see that petroleum products increased in the year 2016 of three per cent which is not as a big diffrence as engineered good which increased of over eight per cent. However, gems and jewellery had a higher percentage in the earlier year, in 2016 it decreased of over five procent. On the other hand, argicultural products were stable, they increased of only point eighty-five per cent which shows that the same number of people could afford going on vacation and use the potential of spending some quality time far from home. The biggest raise was noted in textilium products which increased of almost sixteen per cent, that means that people were buying more clothes which is the cause of polluting the enviroment. Summing up, the chart shows that people in year 2016 invested more of their money in short-time investments such as clothes or vacation.
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categories during the years 2015 and 2016.

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that petroleum products
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2016 of three per cent which is not as a
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as engineered
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increased
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, gems and
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had a higher percentage in the earlier
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, in 2016 it decreased of over five
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products were stable, they
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point eighty-five per cent which
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on vacation and
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the potential of spending
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quality time far from home.

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was noted
in
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textilium
products which
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increased
of almost sixteen per cent, that means that
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were buying more clothes which is the cause of polluting the
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enviroment
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Summing up, the chart
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2016 invested more of their money in short-time investments such as clothes or vacation.
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