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Finally Germans spent the least overall,having similiar spending figures for all 6 products compared in the chart

Finally Germans spent the least overall, having similiar spending figures for all 6 products compared in the chart 3by9J

The bar chart compares the expendure on different consumer goods by the people of four European countries: namely Britian, Italy, France and Germany Overall, British among the four countries spent most of their money in all the 6 consumer goods in contrast with Germany spending the least amount for those products. British also spent highest amount to purchase photographic films while France spent least amount on tennis racquets. In terms of photographic film, British spent well above 170 thousand pounds. This is highest money spent on any consumer goods. France came in the second position in terms of their spending which was more or less 165 thousand. Italians and Germans compared to the two latter countries spent around 15000 and 145000 respectively. Toys and CDs are the second and third most purchased by the 4 countries

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