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The donation index in the uk

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Beginning from eighteen and twenty-five age range, we could say that in the ’90 people were more generous than now. Indeed, charity activity has decreased more than three times in the last twenty years in this age range. This difference has seen a reduction for the others two ranges 26-35 and 36-50 where, however, we can see a major charity activity in the ’90 while for the last two age ranges, higher donations index focusses in the 2010. For people who have an age between 51 and 65, that index has increased about 5 percentual point and this rise has been less remarkable for the older group which seen only a 3 percentual point. The highest donation percentage own to 36-50 group where we can find more than 45% charity activities. Nowadays the best results about generosity come from 51-65 group whit almost 40% of people who give money for poor people.
Beginning from eighteen and twenty-five
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, we could say that in the ’90
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people
were more generous than
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Indeed
, charity activity has decreased more than three times in the last twenty years in this
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age
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range
. This difference has
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seen
a reduction for the others two
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ranges
26-35 and 36-50 where,
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, we can
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see
a major charity activity in the ’90 while for the last two
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age
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, higher donations index
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in the 2010. For
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people
who have an
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age
between 51 and 65, that index has increased about 5
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percentual
point and this rise has been less remarkable for the older group which
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seen
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only
a 3
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percentual
point. The highest donation percentage
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own
to 36-50 group where we can find more than 45% charity activities. Nowadays the best results about generosity
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come
from 51-65 group whit almost 40% of
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people
who give money for poor
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people
.
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