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The given bar graph demonstrates the number of global hybrid vehicle sales in Japan, the US and other countries between the years 2006 and 2009. Overall, global hybrid vehicle sales was the highest number by far in the US in all given period except in 2009. As is presented presented in the graph, under 250. 000 vehicle sold in the US in 2006. Other countries has the nearly sales at under 50. 000 at the same year. Global hybrid vehicle sales increased dramatically in the US in 2007, but after one year declined from 350. 000 to 300. 000. The number of vehicle sales continued slowly in the US and reached at about 280. 000. The number of global hybrid vehicle sales was between 50. 000 and 100. 000 in Japan in first three years. However, it picked considerably and reached about 330. 000 in 2009. The sales in other countries has about 50. 000 in 2006. In following years, it increased steadily and reached to under 100. 000 number of vehicle.
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in Japan, the US and other countries between the years 2006 and 2009.

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was the highest
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by far in the US in all
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period except in 2009.

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in the graph, under 250. 000
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sold in the US in 2006. Other countries has the
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at under 50. 000 at the same
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increased
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declined from 350. 000 to 300. 000. The
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continued
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in the US and reached at about 280. 000.

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was between 50. 000 and 100. 000 in Japan in
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in other countries has about 50. 000 in 2006. In following years, it increased
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IELTS academic global hybrid vehicle sales

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