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task 1Introduction: The given diagram shows the architecture of the wave-energy machine and the components used in it lite(electricity genertor, turbine, chambers, etc.

task 1Introduction: The given diagram shows the architecture of the wave-energy machine and the components used in it lite(electricity genertor, turbine, chambers, etc. PVKDB
task 1Introduction: The given diagram shows the architecture of the wave-energy machine and the components used in it lite(electricity genertor, turbine, chambers, etc. . , It also suggests in which location does wave energy machine is highly efficient and low efficient. Overview: According to the given information the wave energy installed at large waves gives high output than installed at small waves but there are cost variations according to tyoe of installations The wave energy machine water pumpimg machine which uses electricity, airflow, turbine and chambers to spell the water to the ground purpose use. They use electricity for working of the machine it is a step bystep process to spell the water to the ground the turbines are used to push the water to the higer levels with the pressure to pump the water up the waves act most important role in working of the wave energy machuine The location of installation of wvwe energy machine is most important high wave installation more efficient than low lwvwl installation but cost varies according to type of installtask 2: Introduction: buying things online like books, air tickets, and groceries has become very popular because it offers different kinds of platforms to shop. Yes I agree the advantages of shopping in this way dominates the disadvantages in it Online shopping has more advantages because of its availability of different kinds of products with different brands and models. the are many platforms to shop online that are accessible to everybody at their fingertips. the biggest advantages of online shopping are their discounts and prices. it is easy to shop online because of the options or facilities provided on their platforms. There are filtered according to the requirements of the customer. The customer can set the required criteria according to his price range and brands he required and the platforms show only according to the customer choice only. they provide different sales and discounts on a regular basis and seasonal offers like Big billion days, Great Indian sale where you get excellent offers for some expensive goods also. You can buy any product or sell any product online easily and safely. Online shopping is trustworthy because of the terms and conditions which are not biased you can return the product if it is not the kind of product you have ordered within the return guidelines of their policy. There are some disadvantages of online shopping like getting different products rather than ordered products or size difference or damaged product but if it's their logistics flaw then their return policy will cover it and the product is taken back and money is refunded. So online shoppind has more addvantages when compared to its disadvantages
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task
1Introduction: The
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given
diagram
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shows
the architecture of the wave-energy
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machine
and the components
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used
in it lite
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electricity
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genertor
, turbine, chambers, etc.
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,
It
also
suggests in which location does
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wave
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energy
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machine
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is
highly
efficient and low efficient.

Overview:
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According
to the
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given
information the
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wave
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energy
installed at large
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waves
gives high output than installed at
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small
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waves
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but
there
are cost
variations
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according
to
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tyoe
of installations

The
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wave
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energy
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machine
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water
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pumpimg
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machine
which
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uses
electricity, airflow, turbine and chambers to spell the
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water
to the ground purpose
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use
. They
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use
electricity for working of the
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machine
it is a step
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bystep
process to spell the
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water
to the ground the turbines are
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used
to push the
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water
to the
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higer
levels with the pressure to pump the
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water
up the
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waves
act most
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important
role in working of the
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wave
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energy
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machuine


The location of installation of
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wvwe
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energy
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machine
is
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most
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important
high
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wave
installation more efficient than low
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lwvwl
installation
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but
cost varies
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according
to type of
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installtask
2: Introduction: buying things
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online
like books, air tickets, and groceries has become
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very
popular
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because
it offers
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different
kinds of
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platforms
to shop. Yes I
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agree
the advantages of
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shopping
in this way dominates the disadvantages in
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it


Online
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shopping
has more advantages
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because
of its availability of
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different
kinds of
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products
with
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different
brands and models.
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the are
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many
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platforms
to shop
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online
that are accessible to everybody at their fingertips.
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the
biggest advantages of
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online
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shopping
are their discounts and prices.
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it
is easy to shop
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online
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because
of the options or facilities provided on their
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platforms
. There
are filtered
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according
to the requirements of the customer. The customer can set the required criteria
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according
to his price range and brands he required and the
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platforms
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show
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only
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according
to the customer choice
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only
.
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they
provide
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different
sales and discounts on a regular basis and seasonal offers like
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Big
billion days, Great Indian sale where you
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get
excellent offers for
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some
expensive
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goods
also
. You can
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buy
any
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product
or sell any
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product
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online
easily
and
safely
.
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Online
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shopping
is trustworthy
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because
of the terms and conditions which are not biased you can return the
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product
if it is not the kind of
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product
you have ordered within the return guidelines of their policy.

There are
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some
disadvantages of
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online
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shopping
like getting
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different
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products
rather
than ordered
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products
or size difference or damaged
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product
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but
if it's their logistics flaw then their return policy will cover it and the
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product
is taken
back and money
is refunded
.
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So
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online
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shoppind
has more
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addvantages
when compared to its
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disadvantages
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IELTS academic task 1Introduction: The given diagram shows the architecture of the wave-energy machine and the components used in it lite(electricity genertor, turbine, chambers, etc.

Academic
  American English
6 paragraphs
448 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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