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The digram shows the life cycle of a butterfly

This diagram depicts how an egg is turned into an adult butterfly. Overall, it is clear that there are main four steps in the lifecycle of a butterfly. Caterpiller is turned into an adult butterfly and then it eventually lays eggs and the cycle is repeated. First of all, egg laid by an adult butterfly is hatched and a small caterpiller is formed. It is called pupa. They eat leaves of the plants which they are located and grows rapidly. Secondly, pupas wraps into a chrysalis and then it hangs from the leaf or atom. Its chrysalis otherwise called coccon. Inorder to emerge as an adult butterfly. Then, the cycle is repeated by adult butterfly by laying eggs.

This diagram depicts how an egg is turned
 into an adult You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtickverminpestmitebeegnat
butterfly
. Overall
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that there are main four steps in the lifecycle of a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtickverminpestmitebeegnat
butterfly
. Possible spelling mistake found.Caterpillar
Caterpiller
is turned
 into an adult Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).butterfly, and
butterfly and
 then it eventually
 lays eggs and the cycle is repeated
. Often, this adverbial phrase is redundant. Consider using “first”.First
First of all
, egg laid by an adult You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtickverminpestmitebeegnat
butterfly
is hatched
 and a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
Possible spelling mistake found.caterpillarCaterpillar
caterpiller
is formed
. It is called
 pupa. They eat This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departs
leaves
 of the plants which they are located
 and grows rapidly
. Secondly
, Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean “pupae”, the plural form of the noun ‘pupa’?pupaepupspupapupalpumaspapas
pupas
 wraps into a Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).chrysalis, and
chrysalis and
 then it hangs from the leaf or atom. Its chrysalis otherwise
 called Possible spelling mistake found.cocoon
coccon
. Possible spelling mistake found.In order
Inorder
 to emerge as an adult You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtickverminpestmitebeegnat
butterfly
. Then, the cycle is repeated
 by adult You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtickverminpestmitebeegnat
butterfly
 by laying eggs. 