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This chart shows us, the financial aid of six industrial countries to some of developing countries between 2008 to 2010. As we can see, US provided more aid than all of six countries throw these years. US helped about 22 billion dollars in 2008. But in the next year, we can see a slight decrease in US financial aid and at the last year aid was increased 25 percentage and reached $25 billion. Germany, UK and Japan were the other major doner. These countries helped more than 10 billion dollars in all three years. Germany financial aid grew throw these years Unlike UK and Japan which experienced fluctuation. Netherland and Sweden were minor doner and these countries donated less than 10 billion dollars between 2008 to 2010. To sum up, we can see all six countries experienced fluctuation except Germany nevertheless, Us remain the largest doner from 2008 to 2010.
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