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The differences made in Stockford

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The map compares the changes and developments made in Stockford from 1930 to 2010. It is clear that farmlands were entirely demolished and were replaced by multiple houses. A new set of buildings were constructed by 2010. In 1930, there used to be large houses beside the road ending up to the bridge which contained gardens. It can be seen that right in front of the large houses, between the bypass and the River Stroke, there stood a farmland. Right in front of the farmland, two sets of buildings are visible, post office and shops. Additionally, There was another farmland located above the large houses next to a primary school close to the bypath. However, the Stockford saw noticeable alterations by 2010. the mentioned farmlands were all brought down and were replaced by more houses. two more detours were constructed: one instead of shops and the other above the primary school and each were surrounded by 7 to 8 small houses. The large house was cut in half yet with two more house buildings and was turned in to a retirement home with no gardens. There was a sparse enlargement in the primary school property that was built with two more houses.
The map compares the
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changes
and developments made in
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Stockford
from 1930 to 2010.

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farmlands
were
entirely
demolished and
were replaced
by multiple
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houses
. A new set of buildings
were constructed
by 2010.

In 1930, there
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large
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houses
beside the road ending up to the bridge which contained gardens. It can be
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seen
that right in front of the
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large
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houses
, between the bypass and the River Stroke, there stood a
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farmland
. Right in front of the
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farmland
, two sets of buildings are visible, post office and shops.
Additionally
, There was another
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farmland
located above the
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large
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houses
next
to a primary school close to the bypath.

However
, the
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Stockford
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noticeable alterations by 2010.
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the
mentioned
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farmlands
were all brought down and
were replaced
by more
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houses
.
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two
more detours
were constructed
: one
instead
of shops and the other above the primary school and each
were surrounded
by 7 to 8
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small
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houses
. The
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large
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house
was
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cut
in half
yet
with two more
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house
buildings and
was turned
in to a retirement home with no gardens. There was a sparse enlargement in the primary school property that
was built
with two more
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houses
.
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