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The chart below shows the total number of minutes ( in billions ) of telephone calls in the UK , divided into three categories, from 1995-20002

The chart below shows the total number of minutes ( in billions ) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-20002 P6B2
The bar chart shows the total time in (minutes) for three different types of calls in the UK during the period between 1995 and 2002. During the mentioned period, local calls from fixed lines were the majority of all other types. On the other hand, mobile calls took the most less time among them all. In 1995 (at the begging of the period) local calls were the longest with 70 billion minutes, while mobile phones took the shortest time with almost 5 billion minutes, However, national and international calls show a slight increase during the years, while mobile calls show a higher increase during the same period. In 1999 the local calls showed the longest time of calls with 90 billion minutes, just before it becomes to decrease of the first time to reach almost 72 billion minutes in 2002.
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in (minutes) for three
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in the UK during the period between 1995 and 2002.

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from
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lines were the majority of all other types.
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took the
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most less
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among them all.

In 1995 (at the begging of the period) local
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were the longest with 70
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minutes, while mobile phones took the shortest
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with almost 5
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, national and international
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a slight increase during the years, while mobile
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a higher increase during the same period.

In 1999 the local
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the longest
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of
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with 90
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minutes,
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it becomes to decrease of the
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minutes in 2002.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the total number of minutes ( in billions ) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-20002

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