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The chart below gives information on the ages of the populations of Yamen and Italy in 2000 and projection for 2050.

The chart below gives information on the ages of the populations of Yamen and Italy in 2000 and projection for 2050. 2jEX
The chart below shows the percentage of people's ages who lives in Yamen and Italy in 2000 and a simulation for the number of people's ages in the same mentioned countries after 50 years. The majority of people in Yemen is from children between 0 to 14 years old, while the biggest percentage in Italy is the middle aged people from age 15 to 59 years old. An almost 10% increase on the percentage of the children is excepted in Yemen, while the number of old people will not increase a lot. In contract, the percentage of old people in Italy might show a 20% increase during the 50 years, this increase will be on the favor of the children number as the middle aged people number will almost remain the same.
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IELTS academic The chart below gives information on the ages of the populations of Yamen and Italy in 2000 and projection for 2050.

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