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describe the changes of a park from 1920 until now

describe the changes of a park from 1920 until now P6eE

The maps depict modifications of Grange park from 1920 until now. As it can be seen from two maps, the area experienced a complete transformation with various facilities being relocated, replaced and added more to the park now. In addition, the most considerable change is the replacement of fountain by erecting large rose garden and the reposition of seats around the park. Look at the maps closely, two entrances, directly facing with Arnold Avenue and Eldon Street have remained unchanged until now. However, there is a new entrance built at the bottom right-hand side for car parking underground. Many seats put around the park in 1920, has been removed and converged in the middle of the park, which are opposite to new redeveloped amphitheater for concerts. In the middle of Grange park, new rose garden is constructed on the original site of the fountain, leading to the demolition of the pond in the top right-hand corner. Meanwhile, water system needed to plant roses continually will be replaced by water feature, located in the old position of glasshouse. Finally, the removal of small old rose garden and the pond left empty spaces for erecting new café and playground for children in the top right-hand corner.

The maps depict modifications of Grange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 from 1920 until This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. As it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 from two maps, the area experienced a complete transformation with various facilities being relocated
, replaced and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 more to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. In addition
, the most considerable This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 is the replacement of fountain by erecting large You use this word too often, consider replacing it withred
rose
 garden and the reposition of seats around the park.

Look at the maps closely
, two entrances, directly
 facing with Arnold Avenue and Eldon Street have remained unchanged until This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. However
, there is a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 entrance built at the bottom right-hand side for car parking underground. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
Many
 seats put around the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 in 1920, has been removed
 and converged in the middle of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
, which are opposite to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 redeveloped amphitheater for concerts.

In the middle of Grange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withred
rose
 garden is constructed
 on the original site of the fountain, leading to the demolition of the pond in the top right-hand corner. Meanwhile, water system needed to plant You use this word too often, consider replacing it withred
roses
continually
 will be replaced
 by water feature, located in the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 position of glasshouse. Finally
, the removal of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withred
rose
 garden and the pond This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 empty spaces for erecting You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 café and playground for children in the top right-hand corner. 