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The bar chart provides information about the total area of class in six different countries (South Korea, Japan, UK, Denmark, Mexico and Iceland) and compared to average world for primary school (age 5-10) and lower secondary school (age 13-17) in 2006.

The bar chart provides information about the total area of class in six different countries (South Korea, Japan, UK, Denmark, Mexico and Iceland) and compared to average world for primary school (age 5-10) and lower secondary school (age 13-17) in 2006. pB3D
The bar chart provides information about the total area of class in six different countries (South Korea, Japan, UK, Denmark, Mexico and Iceland) and compared to average world for primary school (age 5-10) and lower secondary school (age 13-17) in 2006. Overall, the total world area of primary school was higher than lower secondary school. Meanwhile, South Korea, Japan and Mexico were recorded the highest size of classes amongst six countries, while the lowest space was where in Iceland and UK. In 2006, South Korea was higher size of classes with around 34% to 36% for both primary and lower secondary schools. while the area of primary schools in Japan and Mexico were 31% and the lower secondary schools were approximately 21% to 23% respectively. In contrast, Iceland and UK have the lowest net space of classes for their schools, which the primary schools of Iceland and UK nearly from 15% to 23%respectively, as well as the lower size secondary schools between around 17% and 22% for each.
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. Meanwhile, South Korea, Japan and Mexico
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amongst six countries, while the lowest space was where in Iceland and UK.

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with around 34% to 36% for both
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in Japan and Mexico were 31% and the lower
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were approximately 21% to 23%
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between around 17% and 22% for each.
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IELTS academic The bar chart provides information about the total area of class in six different countries (South Korea, Japan, UK, Denmark, Mexico and Iceland) and compared to average world for primary school (age 5-10) and lower secondary school (age 13-17) in 2006.

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