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the top right-hand From an overall perspective, the campus has experienced a significant modernization with more facilities and infrastrctures added to meet the demand of more students.

the top right-hand From an overall perspective, the campus has experienced a significant modernization with more facilities and infrastrctures added to meet the demand of more students. 7jQ3
the top right-hand From an overall perspective, the campus has experienced a significant modernization with more facilities and infrastrctures added to meet the demand of more students. In addition to this, most of the changes have occured in the south-west of the campus in the period recorded. Obviously, the enormous sports ground at the bottom of the maps and one block of classroms have remained unchanged. Similarly, the large parking lot and the office have undergone no transformations. However, most of the remaining parts of the campus have developed dramatically. The small car park and the road passing through the campus were demolished. Meanwhile, a new swimming pool and a fitness club have been newly introduced. Another substantial alteration is the removal of the T&T library, which has led to the additions of the two centers for knowledgable docents and computer users. Furthermore, the classroom block was upgraded to a three-storey building and a new block has been erected that is adjacent to it. There has been an increase from 1500 to 2300 in the population of the students, which results in the transformation of the campus. corner.
the
top right-hand From an
overall
perspective, the
campus
has experienced a significant modernization with more facilities and
infrastrctures
added
to
meet
the demand of more students.
In addition
to this, most of the
changes
have
occured
in the south-west of the
campus
in the period recorded.

Obviously
, the enormous sports ground at the bottom of the maps and one block of
classroms
have remained unchanged.
Similarly
, the large parking lot and the office have undergone no transformations.

However
, most of the remaining parts of the
campus
have developed
dramatically
. The
small
car park and the road passing through the
campus
were demolished
. Meanwhile, a new swimming pool and a fitness club have been
newly
introduced. Another substantial alteration is the removal of the
T&T
library, which has led to the additions of the two centers for
knowledgable
docents and computer users.
Furthermore
, the classroom block
was upgraded
to a
three-storey
building and a new block has
been erected
that is
adjacent to it. There has been an increase from 1500 to 2300 in the population of the students, which results in the transformation of the campus.

corner
.
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IELTS academic the top right-hand From an overall perspective, the campus has experienced a significant modernization with more facilities and infrastrctures added to meet the demand of more students.

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