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The diagrom gives information about the Australian Bureau of meteorology which gets information regarding weather in order to demonstrate reliable forecasts.

The diagrom gives information about the Australian Bureau of meteorology which gets information regarding weather in order to demonstrate reliable forecasts. 2r5WA
The diagrom gives information about the Australian Bureau of meteorology which gets information regarding weather in order to demonstrate reliable forecasts. Overall, the process involves four main steps in order to predict reliable forecasts, which include information analysis and forecastings, preparing the broadcast and broadcasting. It can be clearly from the graph that there are three sources of 6 incoming information. Firstly through the satellite, Australian Bureau Collects weather information. After that information is analyzed and telecasts through the satellite photo. Then after the computer is used to prepare the broadcast and then after the information is telecast through tv, newsereader, radio and recorded announcements. The second method of collecting weather details is through radar, in which a radar screen and synoptic chart can be used for analysis and forecasting and then after the broadcast is telecast through the television, radio and recorder. and then after the broadcast is telecast through Television, radio and recorder The last and final stage to collect weather up-to-minute information is drafting Buoy. Synoptic chart can be used to analyze and forecasts the information and after preparing broadcast the data is formatted through television, radio and recorder.
The
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diagrom
gives
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about the Australian Bureau of meteorology which
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gets
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information
regarding
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weather
in order to demonstrate reliable forecasts.

Overall
, the process involves four main steps in order to predict reliable forecasts, which include
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information
analysis and
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forecastings
, preparing the
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broadcast
and broadcasting.

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clearly
from the graph that there are three sources of 6 incoming
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information
.
Firstly
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through
the satellite, Australian Bureau Collects
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weather
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information
. After that
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information
is analyzed
and telecasts
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through
the satellite photo. Then after the computer is
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used
to prepare the
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broadcast
and then after the
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information
is telecast
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through
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tv
,
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newsereader
,
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radio
and recorded announcements. The second method of collecting
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weather
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details
is
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through
radar, in which a radar screen and synoptic chart can be
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used
for analysis and forecasting and then after the
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broadcast
is telecast
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through
the television,
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radio
and recorder.

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and
then after the
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broadcast
is telecast
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through
Television,
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radio
and recorder

The last and final stage to collect
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weather
up-to-minute
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information
is drafting Buoy. Synoptic chart can be
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used
to analyze and forecasts the
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information
and after preparing
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broadcast
the data
is formatted
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television,
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radio
and recorder.
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IELTS academic The diagrom gives information about the Australian Bureau of meteorology which gets information regarding weather in order to demonstrate reliable forecasts.

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