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The diagrams show two method of using water to produce electricity

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The diagrams provide how to produce electricity with two methods of using water. Overall, both of two diagrams water turns the turbine and spindle rotates in generator to produce electricity power. Firstly, water enters the Hydroelectric dam with gate and go through the hole, and then water turns the generator to produce electric power. Finally, the water come out of the Hydroelectric dim. On the other diagram, first of makes electric power with Wave-air generator is, water waves enter lower chamber. Next, the water become a gas and fly to make spindle rotates in generator to produce electric power. Then, the gas released from upper chamber. Finally, the water come back with another gate near the first gate.
The diagrams provide how to
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produce
electricity with two methods of using
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water
.
Overall
, both of two diagrams
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water
turns the turbine and spindle rotates in generator to
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produce
electricity power.

Firstly
,
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water
enters the Hydroelectric dam with gate and go through the hole, and then
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water
turns the generator to
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produce
electric power.
Finally
, the
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water
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come
out of the Hydroelectric dim.

On the other diagram,
first
of
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makes
electric power with Wave-air generator is,
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water
waves enter lower chamber.
Next
, the
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water
become a gas and
fly
to
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make
spindle rotates in generator to
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produce
electric power. Then, the gas released from upper chamber.
Finally
, the
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water
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
back with another gate near the
first
gate.

IELTS academic The diagrams show two method of using water to produce electricity

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