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The table below shows the number of vehicles registered in Australia in 2010, 2012 and 2014. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where reverent.

The table below shows the number of vehicles registered in Australia in 2010, 2012 and 2014. YLda5
A glance at the table provided highlights the five types of vehicles registered in Australia between 2010 and 2014, included the percentage of growth. From an overall perspective, numbers for all types had increased. The number of motorcycles grew the most while that of heavy trucks rose the least among the categories. To depict more deeply, in 2010, the number of registered passenger vehicles was 11 million, the highest of all types, and it rose by 18. 2% to reach 13million in 2014. The figure of registered motorcycles increased 30. 7% which was 570 thousand in 2010 then arriving to 745 thousand in 2014. By rising approximately for 17. 5%, the registered commercial vehicles’ number stood at 2. 3 million in 2014 and climbing to 2. 7 million in the end of period. The number for registered heavy trucks and light trucks, stayed with 384, 000 and 106, 000 separately in the beginning and heaving an increment to 43, 000 and 131, 000 respectively in 2014. The former rose by 10. 2% whereas the later grew by 23. 5%.
A glance at the table provided highlights the five types of vehicles
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in Australia between 2010 and 2014, included the percentage of growth.

From an
overall
perspective,
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numbers
for all types had increased. The
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number
of motorcycles grew the most while that of heavy trucks rose the least among the categories.

To depict more
deeply
, in 2010, the
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number
of
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registered
passenger vehicles was 11
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million
, the highest of all types, and it rose by 18. 2% to reach
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13million
in 2014. The figure of
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registered
motorcycles increased 30. 7% which was 570 thousand in 2010 then arriving to 745 thousand in 2014.

By rising approximately for 17. 5%, the
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registered
commercial vehicles’
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number
stood at 2. 3
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million
in 2014 and climbing to 2. 7
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million
in the
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of period. The
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for
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heavy trucks and light trucks, stayed with 384, 000 and 106, 000
separately
in the beginning and heaving an increment to 43, 000 and 131, 000
respectively
in 2014. The former rose by 10. 2% whereas the
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grew by 23. 5%.

IELTS academic The table below shows the number of vehicles registered in Australia in 2010, 2012 and 2014.

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