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The diagrams show two methods of using water to produce electricity.

The diagrams show two methods of using water to produce electricity. PVEyd

The diagrams provide information about two techniques how water can be used in producing electricity. It has shown in order how the hydroelectric dam and wave air generator working. Firstly, the gate must be let the water in and then the water is become faster because the width and angel of penstock. Next, the water will be turned the turbine and the spindle. The spindle is rotated in generator to produce electric power. water then through the turbine are gone down and water is realised to the river. The next two ways, waves are entered through the lower chamber. The wave air will be grown through the small hole in the right side. Subsequently, it will be hit the spindle rotates to produce the electric power. the second, air is gone down from upper cumbers. The air will be raised and turned the turbine and spindle so it will be chanced the direction.

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water
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used
 in producing electricity. It has shown in order how the hydroelectric dam and wave You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathbreezewind
air
 generator working.

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, the gate This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
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let
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 in and then the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
is become
 faster This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 the width and angel of Possible spelling mistake found.pen stock
penstock
. Next
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 will be turned
 the turbine and the spindle. The spindle is rotated
 in generator to produce electric power. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWater
water
 then through the turbine are gone
 down and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
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realised
 to the river.

The next
 two ways, waves are entered
 through the lower chamber. The wave You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathbreezewind
air
 will be grown
 through the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 hole The usual prepositions to use when in contact with the side is "on" not "in". Did you mean "on the right side"?on the right side
in the right side
. Subsequently
, it will be hit
 the spindle rotates to produce the electric power. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
the
 second, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathbreezewind
air
is gone
 down from upper cumbers. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbreathbreezewind
air
 will be raised
 and turned the turbine and spindle This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 it will be chanced
 the direction. 