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The diagrams show house designs for two different climates

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The diagrams demonstrate different house designs for cool and warm climate. By looking at the diagrams, it is obvious that the major difference between the two designs was the roof. Additionally, house designs differ in the use of insulation and windows House designed for cool climate has a high-angled roof which allows sunlight to pass through the window. In warm climate however, the roof has a peak and extends to both sides and creates shades for the windows. Cool climate house utilize building material and insulation with the purpose of heat loss prevention whereas the reflective material and ventilation are used to push all the stored heat out of the house in warm climate. While the cool climate house only has a single window which faces the sun’s direction, the warm climate one has two windows shaded by the roof above and can be opened in the night I order to ventilate heat.
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of insulation and windows

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utilize building material and insulation with the purpose of heat loss prevention whereas the reflective material and ventilation are
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to push all the stored heat out of the
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climate.

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climate
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one has two windows shaded by the
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above and can
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to ventilate
heat.
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IELTS academic The diagrams show house designs for two different climates

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