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The diagrams on the right show two types of building design that help reduce the effects of earthquakes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams on the right show two types of building design that help reduce the effects of earthquakes. xgemg
The diagrams give information about an appartment block and a house were built with structures that help minigate the effects of earthquakes. Both of buildings are rectangular and both have flat roofs are made of concrete. They have some steel pillars going deep below to support the ground level, too. However, the appartment block also have rubber section to absorb shock of the earthquakes. ' And of course, the appartment block is much taller than a house so the walls are conctructed using concrete like the roof too. Some metal bars are placed in each wall to support them. Specially, the sprinkler system is installed to prevent fires. On the other hand, the house is made of hollow bricks, because if they fall, it will cause less damage and impact. The recycle stones was used under the floor. They were taken from destroyed houses to save the cost. Overall, although two types of building designs are very complex, they also have some same point. They clearly show how to protect a building from the effects of earthquakes
The diagrams give information about an
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appartment
block and a
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house
were built
with structures that
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help
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minigate
the effects of earthquakes.

Both of buildings are rectangular and both have flat roofs
are made
of concrete. They have
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some
steel pillars going deep below to support the ground level, too.
However
, the
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appartment
block
also
have rubber section to absorb shock of the earthquakes. '

And
of course
, the
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appartment
block is much taller than a
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house
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so
the walls are
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conctructed
using concrete like the roof too.
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Some
metal bars
are placed
in each wall to support them.
Specially
, the sprinkler system
is installed
to
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prevent
fires.

On the other hand
, the
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house
is made
of hollow bricks,
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because
if they fall, it will cause less damage and impact. The recycle stones was
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used
under the floor. They
were taken
from
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destroyed
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houses
to save the cost.

Overall
, although two types of building designs are
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very
complex, they
also
have
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some
same point. They
clearly
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show
how to protect a building from the effects of
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earthquakes

IELTS academic The diagrams on the right show two types of building design that help reduce the effects of earthquakes.

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