Search
Tools
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

The diagrams on the right show two types of building design that help reduce the effects of earthquakes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams on the right show two types of building design that help reduce the effects of earthquakes. xgemg

The diagrams give information about an appartment block and a house were built with structures that help minigate the effects of earthquakes. Both of buildings are rectangular and both have flat roofs are made of concrete. They have some steel pillars going deep below to support the ground level, too. However, the appartment block also have rubber section to absorb shock of the earthquakes. ' And of course, the appartment block is much taller than a house so the walls are conctructed using concrete like the roof too. Some metal bars are placed in each wall to support them. Specially, the sprinkler system is installed to prevent fires. On the other hand, the house is made of hollow bricks, because if they fall, it will cause less damage and impact. The recycle stones was used under the floor. They were taken from destroyed houses to save the cost. Overall, although two types of building designs are very complex, they also have some same point. They clearly show how to protect a building from the effects of earthquakes

The diagrams give information about an Possible spelling mistake found.apartment
appartment
 block and a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
were built
 with structures that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
Possible spelling mistake found.mitigatemini gate
minigate
 the effects of earthquakes.

Both of buildings are rectangular and both have flat roofs are made
 of concrete. They have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 steel pillars going deep below to support the ground level, too. However
, the Possible spelling mistake found.apartment
appartment
 block also
 have rubber section to absorb shock of the earthquakes. '

And of course
, the Possible spelling mistake found.apartment
appartment
 block is much taller than a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 the walls are Possible spelling mistake found.constructed
conctructed
 using concrete like the roof too. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
 metal bars are placed
 in each wall to support them. Specially
, the sprinkler system is installed
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :preclude
prevent
 fires.

On the other hand
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
is made
 of hollow bricks, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 if they fall, it will cause less damage and impact. The recycle stones was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 under the floor. They were taken
 from This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demolishedruined
destroyed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
houses
 to save the cost.

Overall
, although two types of building designs are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 complex, they also
 have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 same point. They clearly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 how to protect a building from the effects of Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphearthquakes.earthquakes!earthquakes?earthquakes:earthquakes,earthquakes;
earthquakes