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the changes of the city hospital’s road access in 2007 and 2010

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The maps below illustrate the changes of the city hospital’s road access in 2007 and 2010. Overall, there are a number of roads’ formation and the facilities transformation. Initially, in 2007, the hospital was surrounded by the ring road. in the south side of the city hospital, there were two intersections, namely a t-junction which met the hospital road and the ringroad and a crossroad which met the city road and the hospital road. Meanwhile, in the east side of the hospital road, there was a car park which was targeted for the hospital’s staff and public. Furthermore, there were also many bus stops which were built along the hospital road. These configuration, subsequently, have faced a substantial transformation in 2010. There were no more bus stops on the hospital road. Nevertheless, these facilites were replaced by a bus station which was existed in the west side of this road. Meanwhile, the car park eventally was targeted only for the hospital’s staff. However, there was an additional parking area which exclusively targeted for public. This car park was located in the east side of the ring road. There was also the roundabouts which constructed in the two intersections in the southern side of the city hospital.

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