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The two maps compare the layout of the village named Rye mouth from 1995 till now, during that period progress of village can be seen. Overall, there have been several changes the most noticeable being the increase in accommodation, the elimination of fishing industry and the sports facilities have been added. in 1995, there was a fishing port in the southern part of the map, which has been removed in present and that area is covered with sea water. Moving ahead from that draction, shops and fish market were existed which have been replaced with five restaurants and four apartments. In the east-south side the introduction of car park can be seen besides hotel. with regard western side the area of the accommodation have been broaden in present map compared to the 1995. Moving towards north-east corner there was greenery such as farmland and forest park during 1995; however, that place is converted into sport area, including golf and tennis. The location of the roads, cafe and hotel remains on the same place.
The two maps compare the layout of the village named Rye mouth from 1995 till
now
, during that period progress of village can be
seen
.

Overall
, there have been several
changes
the most noticeable being the increase in accommodation, the elimination of fishing industry and the sports facilities have been
added
.

in
1995, there was a fishing port in the southern part of the map, which has
been removed
in present and that area
is covered
with sea water. Moving ahead from that
draction
, shops and fish market
were existed
which have
been replaced
with five restaurants and four apartments. In the east-south side the introduction of car park can be
seen
besides
hotel.
with
regard western side the area of the accommodation have been
broaden
in present map compared to the 1995. Moving towards north-east corner there was greenery such as farmland and forest park during 1995;
however
, that place
is converted
into sport area, including golf and tennis. The location of the roads,
cafe
and hotel remains on the same place.
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