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The diagrams illustrate the ways of house design in both cool and warm weathers. The most noticeable difference between both designs is the shape of the roof. The details of the diagram will be clarified in the following paragraphs. For the house in a cool-climate area, The predominant building material is heat storage, which is covered by insulation to support heat loss reduction. For the roof, the shape must be high-angled, with a wide window against the way of the sun to get heat and light. The inside of the building must be covered by thermal building material. Moving to the latter house, the house is designed by considering the usage day and night. The reflective roof generally overhangs from the home to prevent the light, installed insulation underneath the roof. The closable windows are set on both sides of the house to ventilate stored heat at night.
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design in both cool and warm weathers. The most noticeable difference between both designs is the shape of the
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roof
.
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For the
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in a cool-climate area, The predominant building material is
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heat
storage, which
is covered
by insulation to support
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heat
loss reduction. For the
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roof
, the shape
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must
be high-angled, with a wide window against the way of the sun to
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get
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heat
and light. The inside of the building
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must
be covered
by thermal building material.

Moving to the latter
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, the
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is designed
by considering the usage day and night. The reflective
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generally
overhangs from the home to
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prevent
the light, installed insulation underneath the
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roof
. The
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closable
windows
are set
on both sides of the
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to ventilate stored
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at night.
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IELTS academic The diagrams illustrate the ways

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3 paragraphs
148 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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