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The line chart below shows the figures of CFC emission in four countries between 2006 and 2018

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The line chart demonstrates the emission of CFC in various four countries from 2006 and 2018. Overall, the maximum CFC emitted from Ukraine and Poland. 2012, displayed the almost equal metric tons CFC emission from three countries except of Malaysia. In 2006 Ukraine and Poland emitted the maximum number of CFC gas which was accounted for approximately 5, 000 metric tons there was a dramatic decline between 2006 and 2015 which was almost 0 and 1000 metric tons as the number of emission of CFC hole in Poland on the other hand Ukraine saw a surge in the last yearEgypt release the list CFC as compared to other countries, which was just over the 2000 metric tons in initial year, it decline gradually and it reached at bottom which was equal to the cfc emitted by Ukraine. Over 3, 000 metric tons CFC emitted from Malaysia which remain constant from 2006 to 2012, before reaching at bottom there was a slight fall
The line chart demonstrates the emission of CFC in various four countries
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from Ukraine and Poland. 2012, displayed the almost equal metric tons CFC emission from three countries except of Malaysia. In 2006 Ukraine and Poland
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the maximum number of CFC gas which
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for approximately 5, 000 metric tons there was a dramatic decline between 2006 and 2015 which was almost 0 and 1000 metric tons as the number of emission of CFC hole in Poland
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release the list CFC as compared to other countries, which was
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over the 2000 metric tons in initial year, it
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by Ukraine. Over 3, 000 metric tons CFC
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from Malaysia which remain constant from 2006 to 2012,
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reaching at bottom there was a slight
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IELTS academic The line chart below shows the figures of CFC emission in four countries between 2006 and 2018

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