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The graphs show how energy is used in an average Australian household and the resulting greenhouse gas emissions. Summarize and make relevant comparisons.

The graphs show how energy is used in an average Australian household and the resulting greenhouse gas emissions. Summarize and make relevant comparisons. 9a7R0
The pie charts illustrate the energy consumption in an average Australian household and the greenhouse gas emitted as a result of this energy utilization. Various purposes covered by the charts include heating, refrigeration, cooling, etc. At a first glance, we can observe that 42% of the energy is utilized for heating, followed by 30% consumed for water heating. Other activities like refrigeration, lighting and cooling consume an extremely small proportion ranging around 7%, 4% and 2% respectively. The left over 15% is required for operating the miscellaneous appliances. When we consider the emissions, a humongous 32% of energy is emitted from water heating activities, followed by other appliances (28%). Heating and refrigeration also emit a major proportion of greenhouse gas ranging around 15% and 14% respectively. Other activities like cooling and lighting release a minor percentage of greenhouse gas.
The pie charts illustrate the
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consumption in an average Australian household and the greenhouse gas emitted
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energy
utilization. Various purposes covered by the charts include
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heating
, refrigeration, cooling, etc.

At a
first
glance, we can observe that 42% of the
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energy
is utilized
for
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heating
, followed by 30% consumed for water
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heating
. Other activities like refrigeration, lighting and cooling consume an
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proportion ranging around 7%, 4% and 2%
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. The
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for operating the miscellaneous appliances.

When we consider the emissions, a humongous 32% of
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is emitted
from water
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activities, followed by other appliances (28%).
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Heating
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emit a major proportion of greenhouse gas ranging around 15% and 14%
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. Other activities like cooling and lighting release a minor percentage of greenhouse gas.

IELTS academic The graphs show how energy is used in an average Australian household and the resulting greenhouse gas emissions. Summarize and make relevant comparisons.

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