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The diagram illustrates that a process of conducting electricity in a factory called a hydroelectric power station.

The diagram illustrates that a process of conducting electricity in a factory called a hydroelectric power station. rKepL
The diagram illustrates that a process of conducting electricity in a factory called a hydroelectric power station. The transactions have been shown step by step as visual pictures. The system work as separated into day and night. In the daytime, while water is flowing through down, in contrast to this, at the nights it goes up. In terms of daytime, as an initial step of producing, the river floods into the high-level reservoir. Water is kept by a wall which is dam and it fills the area. Afterward, water severely passes down through the huge pipe and reaches the power station. The electricity occurs in this main part of the system. The power station consists of generators, power lines, and reversible turbines. Generators produce the energy and deploy it by the power lines to the national grid. Reversible turbines manage generators in daytimes. When the sun goes down, the nightshift of the power station is activated. The water from the low-level reservoir comes back to the reversible turbines and is pumped into the high-level reservoir through the pole. However, the high-level reservoir is closed at night. The part of intakes is closed during the night.
The diagram illustrates that a process of conducting electricity in a factory called a hydroelectric
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. The transactions have
been shown
step by step as visual pictures.

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The
system work as separated into day and
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night
. In the daytime, while
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water
is flowing through down,
in contrast
to this, at the
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nights
it goes up. In terms of daytime, as an initial step of producing, the river floods into the high-level
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reservoir
.
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Water
is
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kept
by a wall which is dam and it fills the area. Afterward,
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water
severely
passes down through the huge pipe and reaches the
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power
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station
. The electricity occurs in this main part of the system. The
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power
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station
consists of generators,
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power
lines, and reversible turbines. Generators produce the energy and deploy it by the
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power
lines to the national grid. Reversible turbines manage generators in
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daytimes
.

When the sun goes down, the
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nightshift
of the
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power
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station
is activated
. The
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water
from the low-level
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reservoir
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comes
back to the reversible turbines and
is pumped
into the high-level
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reservoir
through the pole.
However
, the high-level
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reservoir
is closed
at
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night
. The part of intakes
is closed
during the
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night
.
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrates that a process of conducting electricity in a factory called a hydroelectric power station.

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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