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The diagram explains theway in which bricks are produced for the building industry.

The diagram explains theway in which bricks are produced for the building industry. N8Wad

The diagram explains theway in which bricks are produced for the building industry. Overall, the process consists of seven stages, beginning with digging clay and ending up with the brick’s delivery. First of all, clay is bieng diged to be collected (to serve as )and transported to the next stage where the mass is passing throught a metal grid and then being transferred by a special roller on the factury. Meanwhile, water are added to sand. Next, two options are represented here ethier the product is cut by wire cutter to become a brick or using a mould to form it. In the next stage bricks are being dryed in an oven within the time period form 24 to 48 hours. Following this, bricks undergo 3 steps process where the material is heated to a moderate temperature in range of 200-980 C. Then, the temperature is rised to the high scale estimated from 870 to 1300C. Subsequently, bricks are cooling down in a cooling chamber between 48 and 72 hours. After that, the material are being packed as sqear blocks, and finally, the products are ready to use and undergo the delivery service.

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explains
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 in which You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
are produced
 for the building industry.

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, the process consists of seven stages, beginning with digging clay and ending up with the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
brick’s
 delivery.

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First of all
, clay is Possible spelling mistake found.beingBainBing
bieng
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diged
 to be collected
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and transported to the next
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throught
 a metal grid and then being transferred
 by a special roller on the Possible spelling mistake found.factoryfacture
factury
. Meanwhile, water are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 to sand. Next
, two options are represented
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ethier
 the product is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 by wire cutter to become a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
brick
 or using a Possible spelling mistake. 'mould' is British English.mold
mould
 to form it.

In the next
 stage You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
 are being Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "dried", the past tense form of the verb 'dry'?drieddyeddryerdryad
dryed
 in an oven within the time period form 24 to 48 hours. Following this, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
 undergo 3 steps process where the material is heated
 to a moderate temperature in range of 200-980 C. Then, the temperature is Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "rose", the past tense form of the verb 'rise'?roseraisedriserisenrisesrisked
rised
 to the high scale estimated from 870 to 1300C. Subsequently
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstoneslabcinder block
bricks
 are cooling down in a cooling chamber between 48 and 72 hours.

After that, the material are being packed
 as Possible spelling mistake found.squaresharespareshearspearswear
sqear
 blocks, and finally
, the products are ready to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 and undergo the delivery service. 