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The graph below contrasts the global automobile sales from 2007 to 2008.

The graph below contrasts the global automobile sales from 2007 to 2008. e38VW
The chart compares the worldwide automobile sales between the years 2007 and 2008 and the data calibrated in percentage. Overall it can be seen that, United States experienced the lowest sales of automobile, Whereas China had the highest sales in the year 2008. At first glance, the automobile sales in China remained constant for 4th Quarter 2007 and 1st Quarter with almost 20%, Whereas in 2nd Quarter of 2008 sales decreased with almost half. In addition, China did the lowest sales in 3rd Quarter of 2008 with almost -4% among all other Quarter. In Japan, sales were nearly same during all Quarter with around -3%. With regards to Western Europe, the highest sales of automobile done in 2nd Quarter of 2008, Whereas the lowest of them was in 3rd Quarter of 2008. In 1st and 2nd Quarter of 2008, the sales of automobile were similar with -3%. The oveall sales of automobile in United States was lowest comapred to all other country. It had -2%, -8%, -12% and -17% sales in 4th Quarter 2007, 1st Quarter, and Quarter and 3rd Quarter of 2008 respectively.
The chart compares the worldwide
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between the years 2007 and 2008 and the data calibrated in percentage.

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that, United States experienced the
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lowest
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sales
of
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, Whereas China had the highest
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in the year 2008.

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first
glance, the
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in China remained constant for 4th
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2007 and 1st
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with almost 20%, Whereas in 2nd
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Quarter
of 2008
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decreased with almost half.
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, China did the
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lowest
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in 3rd
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of 2008 with almost -4% among all other
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. In Japan,
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were
nearly
same during all
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with around -3%.

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Western Europe, the highest
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of
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done in 2nd
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of 2008, Whereas the
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of them was in 3rd
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of 2008. In 1st and 2nd
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of 2008, the
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of
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were similar with -3%. The
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oveall
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of
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to all other country. It had -2%, -8%, -12% and -17%
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in 4th
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2007, 1st
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, and
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and 3rd
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respectively
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