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The diagrams illustrate the changes that have been made in Newton-Mills over thirty years from 1980 to 2010.

The diagrams illustrate the changes that have been made in Newton-Mills over thirty years from 1980 to 2010. d5gyd
The diagrams illustrate the changes that have been made in Newton-Mills over thirty years from 1980 to 2010. Overall, by 2010 Newton Mills has changed in several infrastructures including bridge, farmlands, road and pond. In 1980, there were significant areas for farming. However, in 2010, this land has shrunk and now they are in a limited portion. A Golf club has been introduced in the top-right corner of the mill by replacing the majority of the farmland. In a similar way, a historical centre has come existence in place of the Roman duine which was at the bottom-left corner in 1980. Furthermore, the post office and the shopping centre was also removed and hypermarket took place of that. Furthermore, the location of the bridge has shifted from the North-West to the middle of the river by 2010. The pond also got replaced by the fishing centre and man-made fishing Lake. In addition to this, modern flats have been developed instead of old workers homes. River Esp position has been altered too.
The diagrams illustrate the
changes
that have
been made
in Newton-Mills over thirty years from 1980 to 2010.

Overall
, by 2010 Newton Mills has
changed
in several infrastructures including bridge, farmlands, road and pond.

In 1980, there were significant areas for farming.
However
, in 2010, this land has shrunk and
now
they are in a limited portion. A Golf club has
been introduced
in the top-right corner of the mill by replacing the majority of the farmland.
In a similar way
, a historical
centre
has
come
existence in place of the Roman
duine
which was at the bottom-
left
corner in 1980.
Furthermore
, the post office

and the shopping
centre
was
also
removed and hypermarket took place of that.

Furthermore
, the location of the bridge has shifted from the North-West to the middle of the river by 2010. The pond
also
got
replaced by the fishing
centre
and
man
-made fishing Lake.
In addition
to this, modern flats have
been developed
instead
of
old
workers homes. River Esp position has
been altered
too.
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IELTS academic The diagrams illustrate the changes that have been made in Newton-Mills over thirty years from 1980 to 2010.

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