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The diagrams given below show changes that took place in Indigo Cottage from 1990 to 2010.

The diagrams given below show changes that took place in Indigo Cottage from 1990 to 2010. eblmJ
The given maps depict the development of Indigo Cottage between 1990 and 2010. Overall, the changes from 1990 to 2010 in the given place Indigo Cottage was changed. It has many development in happen period. Indigo Cottage was North area of the city. In 1990, the place, where Indigo Cottage built, Its only had a garden. That place fully plan and no any development near Indigo Cottage. The cottage and garden attached to each other in took place. After 1990, the development started in the Cottage area, which located in the North side of city. In the year 2010, the North area was fully changes. The development of Cottage and garden are changes. In the garden, the Amphitheater is built between 1992 and 1994. Nearly, sides of Cottage are built by planned mind. The trees are roped and covered the sides of the new land. In 2006-2007, the open-air swimming pool made in the middle of new land.
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was North area of the city. In 1990, the
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built, Its
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attached to each other in took
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area, which located in the North side of city. In the year 2010, the North area was
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, the Amphitheater
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by planned mind. The trees
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and covered the sides of the new land. In 2006-2007, the open-air swimming pool made in the middle of new land.
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IELTS academic The diagrams given below show changes that took place in Indigo Cottage from 1990 to 2010.

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