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Report about generation of electricity

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The given diagram describes how hydroelectric power station generates electricity from river. As can been seen in the picture, the dam is built on the river with two reservoirs: high-level reservoir and low-level reservoir. The high level reservoir placed near the dam and a power station located by low level reservoir. During the day time, the river water flows from high level reservoir to low level reservoir to produce electricity. The generator located in power station, generates electricity from the water which flows to low level reservoir from high level reservoir during the day time and sends it to national grid through power lines. The reversible turbines located in power station pumps water into high level reservoir from low level reservoir during the night time. Overall, the electricity is generated from hydroelectric power station during the day time from the flow of water to low level reservoir and the same water is sent back to high level reservoir during the night time without any wastage.
The
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given
diagram
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describes
how hydroelectric
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power
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station
generates electricity from river.

As
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can been
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seen
in the picture, the dam
is built
on the river with two
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reservoirs
: high-level
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reservoir
and low-level
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reservoir
. The
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high
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level
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reservoir
placed near the dam and a
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power
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station
located by
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low
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level
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reservoir
. During the day
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time
, the river
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water
flows from
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high
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level
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reservoir
to
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low
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level
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reservoir
to produce electricity.

The generator located in
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power
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station
, generates electricity from the
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water
which flows to
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low
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level
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reservoir
from
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high
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level
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reservoir
during the day
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time
and
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sends
it to national grid through
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power
lines. The reversible turbines located in
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power
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station
pumps
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water
into
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high
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level
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reservoir
from
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low
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level
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reservoir
during the
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night time
.

Overall
, the electricity
is generated
from hydroelectric
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power
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station
during the day
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time
from the flow of
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water
to
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low
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level
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reservoir
and the same
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water
is
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sent
back to
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high
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level
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reservoir
during the night
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time
without any wastage.

IELTS academic Report about generation of electricity

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
165 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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