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The diagrams give information about changes in a student accommodation.

The diagrams give information about changes in a student accommodation. VqV3

The two maps illustrate the innovation of the student accommodation from 2010 until now. From a general perspective, these maps indicate several visible changes. These alternations of the student accommodation from 2010 to the present occur in the following features: the garden next to the living room in the northwest, the kitchen in the east, and the outdoor garden in the south of the plan. First, the emergence of two student- bedrooms forced the garden and living room to demolish in the northwest. In addition, the kitchen currently has been expanded with the social area to the east. Moreover, the en-suite was built in the blank spot between the hallway and the student-bedroom in the southeast. On the other hand, the demolishment of the outdoor garden made a room for car parking in the south part of the plan. Other facilities such as bathrooms, student-bedroom in the middle, the garden in the north, main entrance, and hallway remained unchanged.

The two maps illustrate the innovation of the student accommodation from 2010 until This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
.

From a general perspective, these maps indicate several visible This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
. These alternations of the student accommodation from 2010 to the present occur in the following features: the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
next
 to the living room in the northwest, the kitchen in the east, and the outdoor You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
 in the south of the plan.

First
, the emergence of two student- bedrooms forced the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
 and living room to demolish in the northwest. In addition
, the kitchen currently
 has been expanded
 with the social area to the east. Moreover
, the en-suite was built
 in the blank spot between the hallway and the student-bedroom in the southeast.

On the other hand
, the Possible spelling mistake found.demolisheddemolishingadmonishmentdemolishesdiminishmentabolishment
demolishment
 of the outdoor You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
 made a room for car parking in the south part of the plan. Other facilities such as bathrooms, student-bedroom in the middle, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbedfieldnurseryterracepatiogreenhouse
garden
 in the north, main entrance, and hallway remained unchanged. 