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The diagrams depict modifications to an unspecified beachfront area in Australia.

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The diagrams depict modifications to an unspecified beachfront area in Australia. Overall, the area was renovated extensively, seeing fundamental changes to the road leading to the city, its swimming pool, and other recreational facilities. In 1950, to the uppermost part of the map, there was a road running eastward from the city directly to the car park. In the present day, the road was expanded southward, leading to the lighthouse and circling the entire beachfront. A new car park was added, taking up the space where there once was a playground. Another major change includes the addition of a big restaurant and a surf club, which was located to the western area of the beach. The pool adjacent to the two said facilities is now expanded to become a 50-meter one, and while the other pool to the east was unchanged, there was a new surf club added next to it. The dining tables and the pavilion along the road, however, remained at the same position over the given period.

The diagrams depict modifications to an unspecified beachfront area in Australia. Overall
, the area was renovated
extensively
, seeing fundamental This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 leading to the city, its swimming pool, and other recreational facilities.

In 1950, to the uppermost part of the map, there was a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 running eastward from the city directly
 to the car park. In the present day, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
was expanded
 southward, leading to the lighthouse and circling the entire beachfront. A new car park was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
, taking up the space where there once was a playground.

Another major This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 includes the addition of a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 restaurant and a surf club, which was located
 to the western area of the beach. The pool adjacent to the two said facilities is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 expanded to become a 50-meter one, and while the other pool to the east was unchanged
, there was a new surf club This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
next
 to it.

The dining tables and the pavilion along the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
, however
, remained at the same position over the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 period. 