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The diagrams depict modifications to an unspecified beachfront area in Australia.

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The diagrams depict modifications to an unspecified beachfront area in Australia. Overall, the area was renovated extensively, seeing fundamental changes to the road leading to the city, its swimming pool, and other recreational facilities. In 1950, to the uppermost part of the map, there was a road running eastward from the city directly to the car park. In the present day, the road was expanded southward, leading to the lighthouse and circling the entire beachfront. A new car park was added, taking up the space where there once was a playground. Another major change includes the addition of a big restaurant and a surf club, which was located to the western area of the beach. The pool adjacent to the two said facilities is now expanded to become a 50-meter one, and while the other pool to the east was unchanged, there was a new surf club added next to it. The dining tables and the pavilion along the road, however, remained at the same position over the given period.
The diagrams depict modifications to an unspecified beachfront area in Australia.
Overall
, the area
was renovated
extensively
, seeing fundamental
changes
to the
road
leading to the city, its swimming pool, and other recreational facilities.

In 1950, to the uppermost part of the map, there was a
road
running eastward from the city
directly
to the car park. In the present day, the
road
was expanded
southward, leading to the lighthouse and circling the entire beachfront. A new car park was
added
, taking up the space where there once was a playground.

Another major
change
includes the addition of a
big
restaurant and a surf club, which
was located
to the western area of the beach. The pool adjacent to the two said facilities is
now
expanded to become a 50-meter one, and while the other pool to the east
was unchanged
, there was a new surf club
added
next
to it.

The dining tables and the pavilion along the
road
,
however
, remained at the same position over the
given
period.
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IELTS academic The diagrams depict modifications to an unspecified beachfront area in Australia.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
170 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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